These days I cramp the spaces between words with those tiny yellow faces that could smile, wink, smirk and dance, like never before ...
Along with many,
I have learnt
Claustrophobia is not just the fear of enclosed spaces..
There is more to it , beyond the spaces closed.
It is the fear of enclosed minds , shallow words....
and empty smiles ...
There's a lot of maturity and seriousness in what you write
ReplyDelete( which is hard to miss) :)
but dear,i do wish to read something more elaborate
another claustrophobic wanderer :)
:)
DeleteYou are here on behalf of all of us, claustrophobics... :)
ReplyDeleteSo true Neetha, what you have written...
:) hey thanks chechi...:)
ReplyDeletegood to know such claustrophobics exist :P
claustrophobia caught in words that are open ended..but yet minimal...sounds like a modernist poem in a post modern world..:))) gud work NEETZ...
ReplyDeletemodernist poem in a post modern world :) .... thank you dear :)
Delete'Pinchade me bandh pakshi ke tharah hamara mind bhi.......':)
ReplyDeleteEven me feels so... Claustrophobia!!!
keep jotting neetha mole...gud work
Let our blooming smiles replace those empty smiles....
& let it spread radiance's out of it :)
Thanks a lot dear :) ...its always a pleasure reading your comments :)
Deletedona here..:) love you lots :) (despite my inability to follow your words :P
ReplyDeleteDona :) lol...no need to be too humble ( that too before me :P) ..thanks dear
Delete...."fear of enclosed minds and shallow words"... really its a fear neetz..But we too knowingly or unknowingly are inside such claustrophobic spaces responding to empty smiles...
ReplyDelete..sometimes a few words can speak volumes...good work dear....