A theatre resembling a rat trap, much bigger …
The air, dark and dismal, speaking of ages..
Some room freshener, emitting an odour so pungent…
Novel headaches promising a night devoid of dreams…
Invisible rats scuttling around …
Phone cameras clicking away those “Kodak moments of ultimate tedium”…
A film so distant…
A smattering of oaths promising each other “never ever repeat this funny mistake “
And the balance sheet of a day foreseeing a big zero..:))
I wonder how on earth an amalgam of these tidbits did talk of something much deeper !!!
beautiful poem on a horrible movie watching experience :)))
ReplyDeletethat is what i understood ( by d way this is dona )
which theatre, if i might ask :P
heyyy...dona :))
Deleteno comments..:P
neetz....
ReplyDeletesuperb :) :P
ur indite ....really amazed me..Good job ..
hatsoff
"even the worst experience can be the best memories in life"...hahaha.....
Really ur blessed dear..Keep doing:)
sruthi....:))
Deletethanks a lot dear..its always a pleasure reading your comments :)
Oh!Neetz u put it exactly, "the rat trap", "pungent ordour","scuttling rats", "headaches" and the "kodak moments"...love ur metaphors.
ReplyDeleteas u said "a funny mistake" that we cherish forever..a "too close" disaster :)
u sublimated the whole event by this poem..really beautified it with your words..
the final line has in it all..a bit of emotions and melodrama can make a soup, but it cannot promise the taste and flavour..
Lechu..:)))
ReplyDeletea funny mistake that we will cherish forever :)) I can't stop smiling :))
kodak moments indeed :P..too close disaster :P
wonderful observation dear..i really loved your comment esp. the last part :D...hope to make novel mistakes :P
( for this one am sure we would never)...
I wonder how on earth an amalgam of these tidbits did talk of something much deeper !!!
ReplyDeleteLOL !!!!!........... Nice one :)..
thanks yaar :)
ReplyDeletehappy to know you liked it
absolutely lovely :)..
ReplyDelete:))
DeleteGirl...from the reel of life...thoughts n words precisely expressed..u feel d lines...d mood...as usual grt!!!!
ReplyDeletefarah :)))
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